Lesson 5

30.07.15

Peer Feedback

Today we joined up with stream D and exchanged feedback on our 8 spreads. I got lots of feedback and it is telling that we need to focus a bit more by perhaps narrowing down our target age group or maybe focusing on a particular area on mental well-being e.g. anxiety/depression rather then focusing on well-being on a whole. We also need to find some more facts that we can use to back up our statements. Today we were also told that we need to sketch up a timeline to keep us on track for hand in. My partner was away today so we will have to work on that together in class tomorrow.

After todays class it is clear the direction we need to move in is narrowing our brief as it is currently too broad. We also need to look into more imagery for our spreads. We need to learn each others artistic strengths and style so that we can flesh out our aesthetic theme for the brief.