Lesson 23

15.10.15

Final Feedback

Emma and I have been working hard on finalising all of our design elements as well as the dossier and presentation. We showed Nanz what we had done and she really liked it. She pointed out a couple of small tweaks we could make here and there to communicate our ideas better. One big change she suggested was changing our target audience from year 12 students (16-17 year olds) to year 9 students (13-14 year olds). We decided to make this change as it makes more sense to encourage new friendships through our event at the beginning of high school rather then right near the end when students already have well formed friendship groups. It also means students can benefit from the results of our event through out their whole high school experience rather then in their second to last year. We also realised that also means our talk to Mark's 13 year old daughter was also more relevant then we thought. This made our decision to make the target audience change much easier as we knew it would definitely appeal to her age bracket.